Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Excerpt from Chapter 2

Chapter Two: Lord Kaimar


Lord Kaimar was a giant of a man, with a barrel chest and thick, powerful arms and legs. He had a long red beard and mustache, Flecked with gray and his skin was a deep tan color. He was the Baron of Pineshare and the best friend of Duke Ryan von Ravendune. Nearly twenty years before, they had gone off to fight in the Volduvian Campaigns, when that land had sought to invade Dragonshire; one of the easternmost of the Amarcainean Dukedoms.

Since then, Lord Kaimar had been the right hand of Duke Ryan, and trained all the young Squires who sought to join the Knights of the Holy Sword from his Keep in the forest of Pineshare.

He stood atop the battlements of his keep, surveying the Initiates who trained in the courtyard below, armed with sword and shield.

Kaimar wore armor of polished steel, over which he wore a tunic of black, bearing the insignia of Ravendune- a raven; wings spread over crossed swords. At his hip hung a broadsword of steel, which had a hilt of silver and pommel of steel. At his side stood the Duke of Ravendune, who watched the initiates very closely, particularly his twin sons Eric and Brandin.

“We should have some formidable Initiates for the test of Knighthood this year,” commented Duke Ryan.

“I believe so,” answered Kaimar, stroking his long Mustache. “But only a handful of them will succeed regardless,” he added.

It had been seventeen years since the Priests of Madrin had brought the twins to Duke Ryan. When Eric and Brandin were nine, they became Pages in the service of Lord Kaimar. When they turned fifteen, they became his Squires. They took quickly and eagerly to the training in hand to hand combat and weapons required of potential Knights and were Kaimar’s finest pupils.

Both Eric and Brandin were tall, Brandin being slightly taller and both had light brown hair and hazel eyes. They were both handsome and were the fancy of every young girl of noble birth, looking to become Duchess.


Altogether there were twenty Initiates, from throughout the Dukedom, hoping to succeed in the Tournament that would make them knights. They practiced for several hours a day. The rest of the day involved maintenance of Lord Kaimar's keep and work in the stables, washing and feeding his horses.

They all slept in a barracks within the Keep and ate together in the keep's main hall.
It was early spring, and the Initiates were sweaty from their exertions. The sun was beating down on their armored heads. Occasionally, Lord Kaimar would bark out an order to one, correcting their fighting technique.

“No! Not like that, you've overextended your sword arm. Stay within your arm’s width,” he began.  “Do not reach out like that or you’re an easy mark for a counter strike,” he added.

“You there, keep your shield up when you strike! Never let your guard down like that,” he told another. He turned back to Duke Ryan.

 “Your lads are very fast learners’ M’lord. They are easily the best of this bunch.”

The Duke nodded thoughtfully. Indeed, they had progressed faster than he thought they
would. The twins fought with the confidence and prowess of seasoned veterans.

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