Thursday, May 7, 2015

An Excerpt from Chapter 3, The Springfeast

Brandin led Kristana past the vast gates of the castle courtyard into the Royal gardens. These were situated within the center of the huge Citadel.

As they passed, the guards saluted Brandin; raising their halberds to admit them. Outside, the night was cool and the air was filled with the scents of dozens of different blossoms.

Above them, the moon was nearly full, casting its’ light upon the scene.

“It is so beautiful out here,” said Kristana. “And look, The stars are so bright, You can see all the constellations.” She added, looking to Brandin, her eyes full of excitement. “What Constellation were you born under?” she asked.

Brandin thought for a moment. “I'm not quite sure; Eric and I were adopted, so we never really knew our actual birth date. I believe we were born under the sign of the hawk, which rules during the second moon of autumn,” he explained.

“We were brought to the Duke a few weeks’ past the feast of Artimedius,” he added.

“You were adopted?” she repeated. “I didn’t know that.” She said intrigued.

Brandin explained to her how the Priests of Madrin had brought them to their father, the Duke. He then pulled open his shirt, baring the flesh just beneath his heart. Kristana turned away at first, blushing. “Please,” she said, embarrassed, “Please, cover yourself.”

Brandin laughed, “I was showing you the birthmark my brother and I have- the Mark of the Holy Sword,” he explained. Kristana turned back to him, her expression a mixture of fear and curiosity.
“You bear the mark of the Holy Sword?” she asked incredulous.

Brandin nodded, showing her the birthmark which was easily visible in the moonlight. “This is why the Priests brought us to the Duke,” He explained as she studied the mark.

“My Gods,” she exclaimed, looking at him with frightened eyes.

She then turned and ran to the garden entrance, crying with fear.

“Kristana, wait!” pleaded Brandin, charging after her. She was well past the entrance and had disappeared down the hallway. When he had reached the guards, she was long gone.

“Shall we go after her M’lord?” asked one of the guards.

“No,” replied Brandin. He turned back to the garden. “That will not be necessary.”


He looked up to the evening stars, cursing himself for a fool; for showing her his birthmark. She is afraid of me, he thought to himself. Now I have lost her.  He proceeded back to the Great Hall, hoping she would be there.

If you liked this preview, check out "The Mark of the Holy Sword," available on createspace.com amazon.com & kindle.com


No comments:

Post a Comment